Reversed Gender Morals

Reversed Gender Morals

Reversed Gender Morals

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6 Chapters Ongoing Status
Last Update August 28, 2022

Reversed Gender Morals is The JerAncreation,The novel is mainly aboutHey, guys. Long story short, I decided to rewrite my novel. When I tried reading it myself, I figured that things were going too fast.Its just the MCs first day reincarnating, but he already adapted and accepted his circumstances. I feel like he should check things out first before he acknowledges things.On another note, I think Ive done a decent job of conveying what the MC is feeling and thinking, but I don feel Ive done a good job when it comes to the other characters.For example, I believe I needed to at least give a little bit more context on why Kaede was even learning how to flirt.I also need to edit the MCs background a bit. Hes too old to even think of being in a relationship with a 16-year-old minor.Anyway, I know Ive just started, but I want the novel to be at least at the level where its decent enough for people to read it in their spare time that they want to waste.And the first chapters of a novel should always be good in my opinion, since it is where new readers start. Read Novel

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Reversed Gender Morals is The JerAncreation,The novel is mainly aboutHey, guys. Long story short, I decided to rewrite my novel. When I tried reading it myself, I figured that things were going too fast.Its just the MCs first day reincarnating, but he already adapted and accepted his circumstances. I feel like he should check things out first before he acknowledges things.On another note, I think Ive done a decent job of conveying what the MC is feeling and thinking, but I don feel Ive done a good job when it comes to the other characters.For example, I believe I needed to at least give a little bit more context on why Kaede was even learning how to flirt.I also need to edit the MCs background a bit. Hes too old to even think of being in a relationship with a 16-year-old minor.Anyway, I know Ive just started, but I want the novel to be at least at the level where its decent enough for people to read it in their spare time that they want to waste.And the first chapters of a novel should always be good in my opinion, since it is where new readers start. Read Novel

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